The presenter was a senior executive with a major financial institution. A confident speaker. Articulate. Poised. Well organized and rehearsed.
His topic concerned changing standards in modern business practices. A good fit for his audience of some 250 business and community leaders.
He spoke for about 15 minutes.
A profile of a successful presentation?
In this case, regrettably, no.
Our presenter staged his remarks by standing in front of a laptop computer, a huge screen directly behind him. Okay, so far. But, as he made each of his points, he would press a key on his laptop and from an adjacent projector a bulleted transcription of his statement would appear, verbatim, on the big screen.
There were no accompanying pictures. No diagrams or other graphics. Just words on the screen. In small burgundy type on a plain white background. And then more words. And then still more words. Sentence after sentence. Bullet after bullet. Screen after screen. For 15 minutes.
It quickly became distracting. And confusing.
You see, instead of focusing my attention on his message, I found myself wondering why was he speaking to us. If he wanted us to read his presentation, couldn’t he have simply mailed it and allowed us to spend our 15 minutes doing other things?
On the other hand, if he wanted us to listen to his remarks, why was he drawing our attention away from himself and what he had to say by methodically projecting his entire script onto the screen?
Your audience can do one of two things: they can listen or they can read. They cannot do both at the same time. You do not want them to do both. Because if they try, their ability to mentally process — and thus retain — the information you are presenting is severely compromised.
Your job as the speaker is to speak, to make a point, to persuade, to move an audience to action… not to project then read aloud words the audience can read for themselves.
When you use PowerPoint or other visual aid, its purpose should be to illustrate your remarks, not parrot them. Visuals are tools for clarifying complex topics, not for complicating the process of understanding.
As for this speaker and his topic, with respect, this was presentation death by PowerPoint. A well-rehearsed recitation rather than a compelling narrative. A seamless triumph of computer projection technology over human passion and the power of personal storytelling.
In the end, as important and timely and relevant as the topic might have been, I frankly found it hard to be very interested. I was too busy trying to keep up with all the words appearing and disappearing on the screen…bullet after bullet after bullet.
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